DAY 63 
Monday, December 14



1) Make a comment 
on each of your partners' essays -- 
one specific positive comment 
and 
two specific suggestions



2)SIGN UP FOR DIIGO.

3) Read the first part of 
(down to my first sticky note)
and,
USING THE DIIGO TOOLS,
make two highlights

each with a 2-sentence sticky note

3) Essay #10 will be due tomorrow night on your blog. 
Skip the Buzzword step
this time.


CHECK THE MODEL PARAGRAPHS AND ESSAY TO THE RIGHT

Also, review the assignment, below:
Essay Assignment:
 
Note:  
Use the 8-sentence and 4-sentence formats.

Mr. Bob Ewell is described as a "red little rooster", and throughout Ch. 17, Harper Lee develops this metaphor in describing Mr. Ewell.


In the first body paragraph,
analyze the author's use of this metaphor in the chapter. 
Be sure to use very short quotes 
to support your statements. 
In the second body paragraph, 
explain a metaphor that would describe you. 
Are you 
a stately tree, 
a grassy meadow, 
a computer, 
a star in the sky, 
a lamp??
BE SURE TO GIVE SOME 
SPECIFIC EXAMPLES 
TO SUPPORT YOUR STATEMENTS.
Also, mention TKAM in this paragraph, to tie the two paragraphs together.

LABEL YOUR SENTENCES. 

In each body paragraph, use  
and clearly identify  
one compound-complex sentence
to enhance 
the writing.